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Willowindrain 2007-07-03 ch 1,	abuseyeah the nagging voice in my head did say to not review... Anyway ! It's an okay piece of work . You can probably improve by rhyming some of the endings if not all maybe once or twice in one whole piece of work to keep the rhythm going. I quote: "We tear through measures Ripping past each phrase Daring each other To falter." It really reminded me of my orchestra. We always strive to do better than the rest. I do feel for this piece. Keep up the work ;)
Tropic Fruit 2007-01-03 ch 1,	abuseI like the imagery this paints, and how you capture the range of emotions a piece of music can portray... It flows very well. Keep at it!
Tatharwen 2006-03-10 ch 1,	abuseHee hee hee...that totally sounds like orchestra. I love the dramatization and emotion in this. 'For we have played a piece to match a soul's desire' I love that! Keep writing! ~Tatharwen Took~
words music and love stay t... 2006-02-22 ch 1,	abusehee hee! I gave into the nagging...actually I would've reviewed anyway! I love it! Great poetry! It's been a long time since I've read any REALLY good poetry and this is incredible. Great rhythm, i love it. Thanks for the review on THE GAME I hope you'll read my other story that's in progress Sword of the Empress. I hope you keep writting! The Scottish Dragon
Vivian Rose Pierce 2006-02-22 ch 1,	abuseIt's a lovely little poem. I like it.