 Asinine Epiphany 2006-07-05 . chapter 1Well written. Very good |
 Aetha Daemon 2006-05-10 . chapter 1I think you jump into the end too soon. It is as if--woa, bessie! Question=5 stanza, answer=one stanza with no graduation into the point. The last one packs too much punch and makes the poem unbalanced. I feel like I need to give my honest opinions here, unlike many others. If you are wondering why I have been bashing so much of your writing. I do that to everyone. Don't worry. I expect others to do the same to my stuff, so no hard feelings. |
 Ashelin 2006-04-13 . chapter 1Yes, we wait. We can't stop the world, we can only try and help and heal it. Lovely poem. |
 Theatre des Vampires 2006-02-22 . chapter 1so...Since there will be a second coming, we don't have to worry about death, disease, war, etc?
Not following you...
GOOD RHYMING THOUGH.. |
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