it screams your name. this is who you are. and i love you for it.

i agree entirely...although that healthy teenage curiosity is sometimes fairly unhealthy...anyhoos i applaud you for managing to be a gorgeus skinny blonde w/o resorting to bulimia WOO-HOO *applause, applause* i just noticed how much the word applause looks like the word applesauce...*applesauce, applesauce* :) (tee hee) Good poem dahling..and keep writing hon!

That I dont even have words to describe... Amazing.. Simply.. wow...

i love it, especialy the part about the altar of our society, but really did we need to be mean to the hippies? i think picket signs are a good way to protest. _

Okay, if you're going to be a mindless ass, at least have the fecking courage to leave an e-mail adress, coward. Or maybe leave a comment with actual worth, rather than bs we could've lived without. Sorry. Anywayses, yes, a bit rambling but I really like the whole theme of how awful t is when people confrom to the non conformity. An interesting break from normal prose or poetry. I liked it. So yeah, well done!

I doubt this is going to be a very well reviewed piece...learn to write.