Wow, this was really cool. I especially like that last line, "But, I didn't say yes either". That was awesome. You're really good at writing poetry! ^_^

Wow! What incredible imagery! I, unfortunately, can relate. This was very well written, I'm so impressed! Keep writing! You're great! Bon travaille, mon amie!

Wow, this was intense I actually held my breath for most of that. The last line, that really echoes great job!

i'll admit, i was a little afraid to read this poem because often poems written about such subjects are cliche and poorly done.

I was pleased to discover quite the opposite. your repetition was very effective and the way you told the story without TELLING the story and without giving all the details made all the difference. Your choice of images was brilliant(leeches)

the only part I did not like was when you used 'fire' and 'lust' because they are overused.

otherwise, this poem was on point. Props!!