Beautiful and so sad, and again the ending comes unexpected which is a good effect. You truly have talent, your poemsd have structure and your imagery is amazing, very vivid and heart-wrenching. Powerful stuff. You're going on my favourites list. ;-)

Aw..that's a very well expressed poem. I like the variation of the amount of words in each stanza. Overall it has an eerie feeling to it. Well done.