haha this looks good so far, update soon!

neh? what's going on? "she quickly feel into the trashcan?"

I can't wait to see where this goes =D The height... she's a half foot shorter than him, so it's not really close, but it's a nice difference.

Um, I partially reviewed to let you know that I'm re-writing The White Rose, and will be taking it off of Fiction Press to repost the prologue and hopefully the first chapter by today. So if you'd review it again, it would make me so happy =D Thanks =D

-Maranwe Telrunya

=O Dude. This looks very interesting. I would love to read more.

okay, i dont know why but i find this kind of amusing. hehehe, i hope you'll update this soon coz im dying to know whats next. lol. =)

Haha, I really liked it. I'm slapping it on my favorites. While you may not like the format, I certainly found it enjoyable - and trying to smash a window with an iced tea bottle? XD Both original and halarious.

Awesome story! Insprirational hate for your english teacher? Would this happen to be, Mrs. Rodgers? It says at the bottom to tell you what to make better but I don't wanna. Its good.

This was so good!You better make sure and update this ASAP!So, as soon as you update, I'll give you another one of my great reviews!

♥ Jessica

WOW. That was really good sugar plum. I hope you keep writing it, but yea. WOW.

I like it. Especially the witness report. That was just hilarious. I was reading it in school and I was laughing and I think a few people were staring at me but that's beside the point, which would be that I would really like you to update and soon!--MoonP.S. I think the format was okay...!

hmm, an unusual take on things... but I really like it! Awesome way to begin your story. I cant wait to read more, so update soon, yeah?

I've actually penned the concept of doing a similar idea of a coined laundry place romance, still in the works and unposted. Yours is going in a completely different direction though than what I'm working with and yours already has caught my attention with the opening with a police report, very interesting grab. For some odd reason I pictured Paisley with blonde hair, just by the name alone. Really intersted in seeing where it's going...

Nice. It was short enough it didn't bore me. What bugs me is that no one told me about the 5 trick until recently.

This seems funny, but I cant wait to see what happens with the plot, Bradley sure is a lot taller than paisley, anyways I like it!