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| slightlyaddictedx3 2007-05-25 ch 3,  | abuseOH!! LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON PLEASE ND THANK U! xD |
| Reincarnated.Pink.Shoelace 2007-01-25 ch 3, | abusethis story is off to such a good start, hopefully you'll continue writing it |
| under the influence 2006-09-20 ch 3, | abuseOh...you have to keep going! |
| under the influence 2006-09-20 ch 2, | abuseI like it so far... |
| kalicokitty15 2006-07-30 ch 3, | abuseso I finally got around to reading your story.. it's good.. interesting anyway.. to see the snotty point of view a bit... I caught one sentence somewhere.. I lost it though.. lol that was a repeater sentence you state basically the same thing twice.. in both the first and last part of it.. lol it's in one of these three chaps.. lol probably this third one.. |
| luluu 2006-06-24 ch 3, anon. | abusehey, i love this story so far! it sounds like it could have a really good plot so please keep it going! |
| pinkfairydust 2006-05-08 ch 3, | abusehaha! its so good! cant wait to see the next chap! |
| peace etc 2006-04-17 ch 3, | abusegood story! |
| foreverlost 2006-04-15 ch 3, anon. | abusenice chapter. hope your friend is okay, sorry to hear that |
| BlackPanther02 2006-03-31 ch 3, | abuseseems interesting. i hope you keep writing it.~panther |
| Lightning Storm 2006-03-27 ch 3, | abuseI'm sorry about your friend being in the hospital. I hope he/she gets better soon. This was a great chapter, its going to be a great story I'm sure. Update as soon as you can. |
| foreverlost 2006-03-02 ch 2, anon. | abusei like Adam, its sad about his mom though. but it does make for a good storyline... |
| count me out 2006-03-02 ch 2, | abuseVery good chapter! Your discriptions are awsome!! and I'm lovin the story, it sounds like a good set up. Definately keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| alineofprose 2006-03-02 ch 2, | abuseOh! You're not the only one with an obsession. (*sighs dreamily* Italy. Oh) Brilliant, love. Just make sure you don't overdo the stereotypical big brother scenario and the like. Keep writing. -Archee |
| Pretend Jane 2006-03-01 ch 2, | abuseWell Adam didn't seem as bad as Isabella did the first chapter. She seems like total spoiled rich girl. I can't blame Adam for not wanting to see his mother, that can be stressful, even if he does feel its cowardice. So Adam has the crush. I do like that its the guy and not the girl. |