 cynthia 2008-05-21 . chapter 13 Sweet. Almost the same like another story I read in , an x-over. Can't wait for next chappie.. |
 Jackie Tremayne 2008-01-22 . chapter 8This is pretty good. I started reading Book one and didn't stop until I realized there wasn't anymore. =) Good sense of humor and adventure. Can't wait for the part. |
 BernkastelSage 2007-10-12 . chapter 6Another great chapter. I really liked the fight and Chip gaining courage and stuff was really good and written well. Also, way to make me laugh out loud again. I love when a story has the ability to do that. Good work as always~ |
 BernkastelSage 2007-07-31 . chapter 4This chapter wasn't as funny or exciting as the other chapters but it did have it's moments (like when Troy was calling them cute). I'm sure when I get back from my trip I'll have some more exciting chapters to read, so I'll be waiting. Great work as usual. |
 BernkastelSage 2007-07-30 . chapter 3Oh man, Wyn is totally funny! XD I really hope you continue on this because I'd love to read more. |
 BernkastelSage 2007-07-25 . chapter 1I was honestly lauging out loud at some of the partsin this chapter. I really like the idea, although a little overdone, because you pulled it off well and made it fun to read. I'm going to fave this so I can read it later. :3 |