Ah, This is the second piece by you I have read, and it is just as impressive. You have lots of talent. Lots of creativity. Double the Kudos!

You know, you're really good at writing tragic romance short stories. I'm not even going to offer any critique on this one because anything I might change is just style-related, and each author has their own style. I really like these... I'm going to add this one to my favorites list. :)

I'm confused by this. What was their relationship? I missed that one o_o Still, the telling was, per usual, perfect and although the meaning of this piece was lost on me, it was still fun to read and nice to think about. I still wonder why he waited all those years...Uhm... I really, really liked the way you wrote the little metaphor for the Eifiell Tower coming inside, and then changed the flow of Story on us so he went inside. The unthinkable happened. The world would end. XD

wow...nice story =)

i dont think i fully understand it...but it was a very intriguing story...