wow, this is really a great a piece, a lot of the stuff i've read of yours i just think that while you're healing yourself with words (in a way) that the real testament to it is that you could help so many others with what you write, because of a lot of people of the the same age feel the same things, and have no outlet, and at least this way they will know they are not alone, and as you grow and move onward and upward (which will happen) they will be able to see that there will be light at the end of the tunnel, great work as always, keep writing, can't wait for some new stuff i'm sure it'll show lots of growth!

Oh, I really liked it a lot. Especially the end part with the conversation. And the "I can't breathe" part was also amazing.

"My skin is still scarred // And I have scabbed, // Bleeding cuts // Still." ^Those lines struck me, partially because they're so true and seemed so honest. Honestly, I've often felt that way.

I really liked this poem a lot! I could relate. Nicely done!

Wow thats heavy, have you read sylvia plath or heard the band 'bright eyes', this seems to explore similar themes of mental angiush and emotional problems. I simply adore the way the structure and language breaks down at the end, representing your state of mind? Simply perfect in an impure kind of way.