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| chaos called creation 2006-03-14 ch 1,   | M the wording is beautiful. Almost too beautiful that the tragic ending doesn't hit you for a while. Love all the lines, but my favourite has to be 'Typically cold-shoulder shy' soso true. Keep writing and thanks alot for your thoughts on my poems :) |
| Manuel Fajar 2006-03-05 ch 1, | your poetry has taken off or was it a meteor shower that needed a moonless night to bloom? m. |
| EnemyWithin 2006-03-03 ch 1, | Nice poem, excellent word choice. I especially like the lines "Ache, is the feeling left after paper cuts; you are carved too cleanly, stenciled star of my unsettled sight". |
| Chlorinated Pi 2006-02-23 ch 1, | Well, it was an interesting read. I'll save the speculation for another time. *evil smirk* The use of italics was nice on a structural note. |