Oh wow! : O I like how she was happy, then the next poem she had her hair ruined, and now she's sad. It's just like a story! How awesome!

Very touching. I like how you show that a smile is made all the more beautiful it it reaches your eyes. Fantastic haiku.

Daze

unbinding the heart - powerful visual.

Torn emotions...

Some nice rhythm.

I should hope those two are not tested first.

Such a grave image - one of weeping sadness.

So saddening.

Quite passionate.

Nice sensuality in the end.

Nice character sketch and little rhymes.

Such abrupt emotions - love it.

The middle line should continue the asyndeton so it sounds more pleasing to the ear: "so low, so soft, so soothing"

Otherwise, lovely.

Fun

First and foremost: she should report this to the principle.

Second: the guy shouldn't stop liking her simply b/c some terrible people ruined her hair - it will always grow back. if he does stop liking her, then he's not worth it.