Nice, Jealousy! OH the pain of this meaning! Only if they cared enough to write, say, burn "I love You," when the strike!A call of vengence, and hope goes out to those who have died.

Erm, don't get me wrong, but this would make the PERFECT emocore song. (Yes, I adore the genre). Emotional, sensational, bitter and painful.

Wow another very delightfully dark piece of writing dear sunami. It is very strange when we realize we arent as "good" as we think we are and stoop to things such as jelousy. damn humanity haha.

I love this piece though. It flowed lovely and it was very well written. I found it quite unique. Personalizing items to kill someone with... dark. Nice... Bravo keep writing.

ah, i adore the formatting on this one.so clear

write “i love you” on the blade-strong opening, really captivating.

it inspires me right now

Very full of passion. I enjoyed it. Sometimes it was a little awkward, but over-all, it was wonderful (and your title was fine)

Wow.. That was pretty powerful! I feel as though each sentence you write is laced with both love and hate.. I can't really distinguish the feeling that I get from this. Resentment too.. The flow is really good, the format too.. I like it coz its different and new.. It makes me look for more to read. One thing I want to suggest is that in the lines : "leave me empty and shaking so iwill never say your name…" its sound better if the line break would be at shaking/so I...N e ways, nothing really serious, so you dont have to do n e thing =D.. I Loved the ending most.. very very powerful and confrontational. Lovely.. keep it up!Have a beautiful day.

--Much love, Meme