Except for some grammar errors (line 4: "malign" is a verb but it sounds like you wanted to use it as a noun, so maybe "malignancy"?...and line 7: "maleficient"?), it's nicely written. I like the imagery as well as emotion.

very sweet and nicely written

it is different but Awsome! i love it I haven't read some of your stuff in a while. I think you've grown so much as a writer. Keep it up.

Yup, definetly not your style at all...but that's not a bad thing. Your poem has an elegance about it...but more so than that it's about a strong emotion and you get that across. I definetly feel it...and can relate to it...nicely done.

Nice poem! You sound really happy here, a nice change from your last poem (cheap and affordable).

Your boyfriend must really make you happy. When I was really getting into this, it ended. :(

I loved the flow. It was easy to read, and easy to understand. Most of the poems I read don't make a drop of sense, I'm glad yours did.

~Gary