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| Robin Siskin 2006-06-28 ch 1,  | abuseIt sounds like a ripoff of Semisonic's 'Sunshine and Chocolate,' to be quite honest. "Until I get to kiss you again, I wish you sunshine and chocolate every day." I caught the Temptations spoof, 'I've got sunshi-i-ine on a clo-ow-dy da-a-ay, when it's cold outsi-i-ide, I got the month of may,' but I wasn't really feeling that it was a clever spinoff of either song. I thought I had reviewed you for some reason, but apparently no. |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-03-08 ch 1, | abuseHeartfelt and true. Good sayings. Excellent. |
| lordelfy 2006-03-05 ch 1, | abusei like this..i think it would make a very good away message for aim..i might use it! |
| cling peach 2006-02-27 ch 1, | abuseAw! That is adorable!! "Bring me some sunshine on a cloudy day But don't bother sending the rain away" I love that to pieces!! It's just so cute!! I love love love it. ^_^ Normally I hate rhymes but this flows so well... wow, this is so pretty. I love it. Never stop writing!! |
| poemkitten7 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseYay! Happy poem! Lol. Oh my gosh, same here! I've read so many depressing poems (I've written many, too), so it's a great change to read something so peaceful and cheerful. I love it. Such a pretty poem to share with your friends. :) |
| Bllatrx 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseYou're right, I could see this being one of my away messages, it's very nice. |
| Smeagol Fasir Kenobi 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good.I really liked the line, "But don't bother sending the rain away." Maybe this is me reading too far into a metaphor, but it seems like acceptance of the fact that no one is going to make the problems, or rain, of this world go away, but just by being there can add a little sunshine. Thanks for reviewing my stuff. It's always good to know that there is someone out there who is looking beyond the basic appearance of the story and is getting some deeper meaning out of it. It's very encouraging. Thanks, mellon nin.Namarie--Smeagol Fasir Kenobi |
| catching-falling-stars 2006-02-24 ch 1, | abusea very sweet poem by a very sweet author. ^_^ |
| XInSaNeXBlOoDyXPrInCeSs 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abuse^_^ |
| Vivian Rose Pierce 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abuseIt's beautiful. Short, yet sweet. |
| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abusethats cute i really like it. ~SarahJane |