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| Chaotic0ne 2006-03-24 ch 1,  | abuseThe bond between two siblings is somewhat of a miracle within itself... Makes me want to call my little brother. Loved it. Keep it up. |
| kt in the sky 2006-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI can relate to this very much. =) I like the loyal little me part. you're a good writer!! |
| ChasingPerfection 2006-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI like the image of your little sister waiting for you...I picture her sitting at a front window staring at the driveway like the kids in Cat in the Hat, lol...hm...again not traditional haiku but there are places for both in this world so I'll forgive you ;) |
| Bronzeage 2006-03-08 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, at last a haiku that means something. |
| La Gitane 2006-03-05 ch 1, | abuseAw, lovely. So sweet. Although I feel pressed to note that the last line is almost slightly creepy, that might just be me being weird. |
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2006-03-01 ch 1, | abuseI liked how you ended this, you're pretty good with these haikus. |
| Emily Marie 2006-02-27 ch 1, | abuseI love your haikus. This is my favorite. I love how you word your haikus and how you put them together. Very very nice. I have a younger sister too. |
| likes to headbang 2006-02-25 ch 1, anon. | abusenicely written |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abuseWonderful sentiment. Well written. |
| Aquafied 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abuseaw, sweet.but younger siblings i know not quite nice though |
| Needa S 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abuseSweet, nicely done. |
| hey maria 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abuseAw. That's sweet. |
| Princess-anna57 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abuseAw! Cute! I like! Write on! ^_^ ~Anna~ |