Oh wow...this was really touching. Smooth flow, and I enjoyed the lines.

Very touching. Awesome write.

it was touching to say the least, heart retching in the most~ the last stanza was a wonderful finish~ great job

keep writing!

Wow, this is so sad...but at the same it's so cute. I love how you made at least two lines in each stanza rhyme. That was brilliant. The way you described being in love was very nicely written. I can totally relate. Keep up the good work!

great poem. i like the set-up of it, and i especially like the last stanza. good work.~dropsofjewpiter~