Hiya, plummet!And you thought mine was a worthy sonnet? Hah, it's nothing compared to this one. Very descriptive and creative. Great choice of words. I never did believe in the old saying, "action speaks louder than words." They need to read this and find out that they're wrong. Hehe. Keep writing! You haven't updated in a long time! ~_^

Interesting, though I'm a bit confused here because there are various kinds of sonnets that I've come across and I'm kind of jumbling everything up so...yeah. No matter, I love the imagery in this and the last line was just powerful. Good job. :)

And you say rhyming isn't your thing! I couldn't write a sonnet like that in years! Thank you so much for reviewing, and I apologize for not replying soon enough. If you're interested in elves, check out 'A Folklorist's Wish' and 'Released'. A warning, though. Released deals with a lot of homosexual love, and I did rate it M for content. However, I feel so free in writing it that I think you might like it too, since the language is rather poetic. Laters, KD

i love the first line, everything was great, but i love how you wrote the first line, which is arguably the most important line in the poem~ good work

keep writing!

Awesome write. Keep up the great work.