It's really good!! I love it ^^ Thanks for reviewing my stories!! I'm Non-Denominational Christian. Frogs are lucky in Japan? Never knew that! U learn somethin' new everyday I guess ^^ Good job and I look foreward to reading your other fics! Oh, and I love Hayou Miyazaki-san's works!! I've so far seen Spirited Away, Kiki's Delivery Service, and Naausica of the Valley of the Wind. and I really wanna see the movies airing on Cartoon Network like Princess Mononoke and Castle in the Sky. I can't wait to see Howl's Moving Castle! I watched some of it Japanese subtitled at YouTube, so I really wanna see it in English :) Ja ne!

i like...

i related to a lot of the poem, for example: "Be brave; it will take many times

Of walking tightropes untold

Before they will see.

Be courteous, by conveying the truth,

Painful or not, in whatever means

Are open to you

For warriors use what they can

To succeed."as a writer, you should be willing to talk about anything...

/me says good job. keep writing:3

Great poem, I loved it! The flow is nice and the wording is wonderful. Great topic, as well. :)

Very inspiring! Great wording. I love the metaphor. Some parts seem a little choppy, but nothing serious.