This has to be one of my favorites of yours. I love the beat/flow of this. Especially the lines "the psyche/the soul". Those two just work so well together. I love how it is about reaching for one thing, and getting to something deeper. And of coarse, more meaningful. That's what makes this composition great. Keep it up!

Nice poem :) I like how you used a lot of "big" words to describe something so simple. I really like it. Kinda of reminds me of some stuff thats been going on with me lately, so its great.

Keep writing,

~Rhia

great poem, i love the line 'unintentionally, a miraculous folly' i don't get to see the word 'folly' used to often. ~dropsofjewpiter~