Wow.

That's one morbid mother ^.^"

let me guess...that man along the shore...? pssht

heyhey...i loved this! It was a lullaby as a poem, i thought that was cute! My favorite lines were:

"The face of the fire

Burnt into your eyes, turning

Molten and golden"

Im not quite sure, but for some reason, those lines stood out the most to me. I loved this poem..*kw* it rocked!

~britney~

great poem. i like the repetivness of the line 'the lullaby, lullaby'. good work.~dropsofjewpiter~