I AM in seventh grade, I like to write too!

A lesson I learned in sixth grade upon my completion of my second 'book': The length of a story is NOTHING to brag about. One hundred and six pages, all of it was crap. I was ashamed of it.

I read through all my other stories. Bad grammar, mis-spelled words, bad plotline, clich`ed characters...

On that note (characters) the ones you've came up with are very un-realistic. An asian-american woman, good job, probably beautiful, most likely with a dramatic past, AND psychic powers? Eh...no thanks.

It's impossible to learn all the known languages of the world by 40/25 or whatever.

Well, your journal was interesting at first, but it became a Case Show of all the characters you've written up.