   e a t i n g . f l o w e r s 2006-03-03 . chapter 1What a great analogy! Loved it. Great poem. Great idea. Keep it up! |
| Vivian Rose Pierce 2006-02-23 . chapter 1 I like it. The first part cold and dismissive, the second retreating and kind. Very nice. |
| Nivek Relleom 2006-02-23 . chapter 1 i like the idea of the poem very much. nice job. |
 Needa S 2006-02-23 . chapter 1Cool write, keep up the awesome work. |
| Drops of Jewpiter 2006-02-23 . chapter 1 great poem. it's an extremlly original comparison to love- i tend to get a bit sick of the sappy ones.good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~ |
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