Stunning. It's so lovely, I just drank it in. Just one correction..."as water swirled around her."Should be "swirls", right?

^.^ So unique! The subject might have turned cheesy if you had used too many 'water' related words, but you effectively used metaphors to create water without really overusing the word! ^^ I and VI were the awesome...est. I know, I'm so clever. xD I must...read...more!`~Bella~`

Very original! Some of them I don't get... I guess the last one is about a river? I've never read anything like this before. I never knew evenescent was a real word... aha, it means "likely to vanish." Learn something new every day! Well, I applaud you! *applaud, applaud*

They are all great, but this is my favorite: The sky is mourningpouring forth quiet tearsinto deserted streets.Beautiful! Keep up the awesome work.