Nice rhyming format. I suggest maybe adding more imagery, to get more feeling out of the poem. Love the last two statements. Overall, this is a good standalone abstract poem that several girls I know I can relate to.

great poem. i love the last two lines.~dropsofjewpiter~

I like the last part;

I tell my other self: “I want to cry.”“No.” she said (says) . “But what you can do is die.”

You might want to work on the rest though, no offense. I think your other poems were better, but this was still very good.

pretty good. Needs a little work, though. Some of the rhyming is forced and you're not very descriptive. But keep on it and you'll get it...