You have captured perfectly the allurement of a winter night, and the picture you have painted to the mind was absolutely stunning. I simply loved the details, and your poem. Wonderful job!

Wow, this one's awesome!! Love the metaphors! Nice job! Keep writing ^_^

Jade

i totally love the images. and it's really fun to read out loud, so rythmic and flowing!

i love the poem- it's short and simple but you use great language. 'liquid ice filled candles' is a great line.~dropsofjewpiter~