Wow! Awesome write. Thanks for the reviews.

O_O Words cannot describe the emotion that stirred within me...so I'll try my best to review!

To me, it seems like the ending of a great tragic battle where the hero is standing there among the ruins. Cliche, but emotional.

beautiful poem, nicely done.

wow this was really good! i enjoyed reading it! keep up the good work!

~SarahJane

And this is a very fresh piece too. I like the last three lines especially. Heroism grows jaded, doesn't it?

it seems like the new "cool" is to center all the words and left-align the last line? anyway, nice poem. it sort of feels like the period before some major battle, especially because of the last line. and the thing about the hero saving one more world.