I'm pretty sure I know who this is about, so my review shouldn't be taken as seriously as others. Secondly this is my first review on any person's works ever, so hopefully it wont come across as useless. It will probably be more like a comment than anything, so apologies ahead of time...

I like the allusions and terms you are using, like percentages and statistics, because that gives meaning and reference to where the friend is. In the second stanza my suggestion is to maybe add in a quote by the friend to show us more of who he is and what he means to you.

Toward the end I lost confidence of who this poem is about (that is, it's not the person I thought it was?). Someone who is reading this for the first time might think that this is about a girl you love, a comrade in war, anything.

It's very sentimental and justly so. My thoughts on the poem overall is that it sounds almost to be a song, partly a letter, and yet still remain in poetic form. ... Like I said, though, it has obvious meaning to me because I know you (and the person this is about?).

great poem. i love the line 'to comfort myself in your saturine silence'good job ;)~dropsofjewpiter~