wow, this was lyk freakin' amazing.. can't wait to read more of what u did...

Aww, great! I especially loved the sentence '...the tree that laced it's branches across the moons face.' That was really nice and poetic sounding. This was so good that it's almost mean that you put 'to be continued?' There's no doubt about it! You HAVE to continue! You have to!

Frm Tasha West