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Roadside Dryer 2006-03-05 . chapter 1
Wow, that was great. I like how it seems to shift in a way, shift in time periods. I can't wait for another chapter.
Iris Devine 2006-02-27 . chapter 1
so, does she really have a gunshot wound? Wouldn't she die if she got shot in the head? Wouldn't people help her? Is she psycho?

good, thopught provoking story. I like the repetition of the phrase "the day I didn't see him anymore."
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