This tale is fascinating to me. I love the detailed descriptions && the time && effort you put into this story. Mark's persona is rather sweet && ...Liz? Yeah, Liz, her character is coming together nicely. The vampire, though, sounds a bit... grotesque, based on the portrayal of his appearance. No offense. Overall, awesome. Keep writing! --strobeXlightXstatic

Hey! Love the story, as always. I still love Tallus...I think I have problems.

Awesome..now let me read some more! lol.

Hey. Told you I'd review sometimes. I read it at school when I was supposed to be working on an online test. Very good start. And I love flashbacks, so that makes it even better. There were a few things wrong, only like a spelling thing here and there, but nothing big. Anyway, good job.

I like. I haven't written anything other than what I sent you. I don't think I'll get much of it done either. I just can't get back into the mood I was in when I wrote it. Everything is either too happy or it's so dark it sounds retarded. Oh well. I do love your story and you must email me more.