a lot of the time i find myself opening the review window and writing 'i...' and then clicking the red circle at the top, because i just can't use the words as well as you.

the last line is lovely and haunting, just like the rest of it, and this is when the words begin to fail me.

This is so beautiful. I just love the way you describe things (the red-blue red-blue red-blue) and combine words so it's all breathless.

I like this! Very well written. You're a very good writer. It's a work of art!

Been listening to Two Little Girls, much? :P I like it. :)

gorgeous. dark, beautiful and exotic. keep it up!