"Don’t point out my every mistake/ And when I begin to fall to pieces/ I’d rather you leave me alone to break/ I don’t want your help, I don’t need it/ Biting back tears wishing to run/ I’d rather save myself before asking you"

my favorite part of the poem. i've had a lot of those same feelings with friendship, and someimes i wonder why i'm still trying to hold on. i don't know. so much emotion was put into this piece. i honestly don't know what to say. great job.

~shadow

Wow. Great job. I love the amount of emotion you put into your poems. It makes them even awesome-er.

~dragonzz~

i really am liking this one a whole lot! i just don't know which I like better! EEK! anyway, this one is coming close to bein a fave, Keep up the great work! FLAMING ALASKA! *slap slap slap*