Aww this poem makes me want to cry because recently i went through something like this. You do a wonderful job at putting the emotions out there! Good poem i really like it!

wow... this is definitely my favorite. the ending was my favorite part. wonderful word choice. i also liked "I feel like I'm falling in you, until i hit the floor" this would make a really good song to listen to.

~shadow

I love the way this rhymes! I really like the lines, 'I feel like I’m falling in you,Until I hit the floor…'

Great job

~dragonzz~

The rhyme and rhythm are consistent. I love the concept, and message. Great Write.:)