I'm curious are you going to finish this story? It seems pretty intriquing and i want to know what happens when he comes face to face with this other vampire.

I think that your story has definite potential and I will continue reading it!

I think that it would be even better if you added in more details. for example in between quotes of what people are saying, tell how they are saying it or what their expressions are...just an idea. :)

that's pretty good. i cant wait to find out what happens next! keep up the good work!

~Jynx~

I love your story so far! I really really want to know what's going to happen now!! Please update as soon as you can!

i love the tell me and i'll shoot her part. pretty funny.

~Jynx~

sheesh, that vara chick is annoying. at least to me anyways. cant she take a hint? shesh.

~jynx~

interesting...

~Jynx~

pretty good so far. keep up the good work. i cant wait for the next chapter.

~Jynx~

I like it Ill have to keep cheaking for updates ^.^

Hehe I like it. It's good so far. I like the part about sticking the gun down the pants just for the hell of it. That made me laugh. Anyways keep up the good work.

You can always decide to give him the romantic feelings as the story progresses. That's the great thing about writing! These things can sometimes come from nowhere. Great update!

*waiting patiently for updates*

ASHER! *Dreamy Sigh* Okay, I did not just do that. Heh heh. Ever read Laurell K. Hamilton's Anita Black Vampire Hunter series? Ashers my favorite character!! Lol. PLEASE update!!

Cool start.