hey!

i like this a lot... it has a great rhythm... yes, i know i said i wanted some free verse but you never listen to me, lyss!

nach

Cool! Is this the one you 'wouldn't show me cause it wasn't finished'? If so then :P! I read it!! If not then ...show me! please?This was awesome! I like nice rhyme! Love rhyme and the rhythm was awesome, not to mentiont eh imagery. well written

I like it...you know, you could probably use this to make a pretty good story.The poem could become more emotional if you gave the angel a name or someone they could relate to. If she had a name it would make her more concrete.