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| lilypad06 2008-01-02 ch 1,  | abuseI loved your poem. I could relate. Three simple words... yet I held such a strong belief in them and in the end it hurt too much. |
| Cait Street 2006-05-12 ch 1, | abuseoh wow...This was yourt first poem?Jesus, I can't even write like that!!Its powerful. And it asks a lot of good questions that i have asked myself. I love it. Awsome job!! |
| ashley metcalfe 2006-03-02 ch 1, | abusei guess you'll never know what love is. |
| Islington Angel 2006-02-24 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all (to address your summary): You don't have to review someone just because they've reviewed you. I'm certain it gets tedious after you get popular--which you will certainly be if you keep writing like this. It seems to have the most recognizable emotion (easily understood by the reader regardless of gender/culture) and asks the reader to pose the questions to themselves: "Is the risk of hurt worth it? Did I make the right decision--though it both joys and pains me so to be in love? Did I do right in picking the one I love? Is love even real?" Very good. Continue with this sort of passion and you'll have it for a very long time. |
| angeloftheninthorder 2006-02-24 ch 1, | abuseI really like this poem. It came straight from you which makes it all the more truthfull. I loved it. |
| sonya wilde 2006-02-24 ch 1, anon. | abusevery very good, i loved this poem so much |
| Darcy666 2006-02-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseIts really great poem i didn't no u wrote poetry :S lol its really great |