Nice short free verse. Sad though. Hope your bruise heals. :]

Short, sweet, and splendid! I don't know if you did this on purpose, but it shows a wonderful contrast between being young and growing up. Amazing. =]

wonderfully written.it explains the concept of a broken heart in a simple, yet sophisticated way. kudos!

absolutely beautiful.

I love it!

Wow.

Honestly, honey, this is possible my favorite thing by you.

The whole concept is just so perfect.

I don't know what else to say.

I.Love.It.

this is a good way of expressing confusion/hurt/embaressment or whatever, i dont know what your feeling- im sorry this is a bad review

wow short but really good

...wow, Ella. The concept is amazing, love the idea...you amaze me. But who bruised it? Well, I love you, see you soon hopefully...