i really like the song. very nice. flows really well. -thanks for the review. i think you liked goodbye cut, but i couldn't tell too much. thank you anyway- =l

great poem- i think it would actaully work well as a song- i could hear a defined beat as i read it. good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~

Good. Definately brings a sound. Quite steady and lyrically well written as some lines bounce off of each other well. Good song.