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| l0v3abl3 2008-07-25 ch 13,  | abuseI loved it. It's awesome. - l0v3abl3 |
| instantvoodo 2008-07-15 ch 9, | abuseGreat story so far, I'll be sure to read more of it soon! |
| rockjam 2008-07-07 ch 13, | abuseaw.. Such a cute ending. Loved the story. |
| Hazelnut-Romance 2008-07-06 ch 13, | abusenice story with a different plot! |
| BeautyIsn'tSkinDeep 2008-06-30 ch 13, | abusethat was a short ending but still brilliant, you couldn't have written anything else :) |
| Skeptic-Critic 2008-06-30 ch 13, | abuseI can't believe it's over...I'm overjoyed that it ended the way I wanted it to at least...I'm tearing up now knowing that it really is over...And I won't have these updates to look forward to anymore...I'm always terribly sad when a story ends...Even if I do love the ending...Very very happy... |
| Jayjack 2008-06-29 ch 12, | abuseah poor little Brent. it's alright Duncan is so much better for her. oh god only the epilogue left. |
| Jayjack 2008-06-29 ch 11, | abuse-He had looked at me for a bare second and said, “I love you.” wow. just that one sentence made me start to cry. awe plus i'm watching Drive Me Crazy and it's my all time favorite 80's love song. "Keep On Lovin' You" ahh REO Speedwagon how i love you so. on to the next chapters only two more to read. so sad and yet happy :'D |
| Twilight Starr 2008-06-29 ch 13, | abuseNice ending. The first lines made me laugh. It was an enjoyable read. Keep writing! :D Have a marvelous day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| FM Radio 2008-04-06 ch 12, | abuseaw. now that's just sweet. |
| FM Radio 2008-04-06 ch 5, | abuseTHos are my favorite kind of skittles too! *grins goofily while daydreaming about skittles* |
| FM Radio 2008-04-06 ch 4, | abusePoor girl. That's something you never want to be called. |
| Miss. Paradox 2008-03-21 ch 12, | abuseI just got done reading it and I must say it was lovely story. It was entertaining and of course totally "Aw" worthy at the end, haha. I must say that I think you could have added more to the plot and there was a lack of appearances by characters other than Lark and Duncan. But, other than that there's not too much I can complain over so job well done! |
| Deafgurl's world 2008-03-13 ch 12, | abuseWow...i glad that Duncan and Lyle end up together. I gladly she tell truth to Brent. I gladly she is happy now with her life...Hurry update soon. |
| kanders 2008-01-12 ch 12, | abuseAMAZING story! i loved the characters and i loved how you ended it, especially how you said "i told him [brent] my answer" without actually telling us until the end! Great work! |