| Reviews for The Deal with Satan's Son |
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Lidiu 6/26/06 . chapter 7I REALLY LIKE IT! |
Lightning Storm 6/26/06 . chapter 9That makeout scene was amazing. WOW! I can't wait to read more of this story. I feel so bad for Brent...NOT! Update soon |
blackvespers 6/26/06 . chapter 9i like the story...cliche yet cute. keep it up. a little thing i was wondering...could you put up pics on ur main page of how they look like...appearance wise? thanks update soon. |
luluu 6/26/06 . chapter 9 omg FINALLY!lol, they are so cute together and im glad that brent is out of the picture...well for now at least;)...i hope this isnt the last chapter, but considering the ending of this one i doubt it will be the last! lol..well update soon! |
ruthiepoof 6/22/06 . chapter 1 I like your story and Duncan is growing on me! Please continue this story because it is really nice, Duncan is really a sweet guy! |
violet-eyez 6/21/06 . chapter 8oh tell me she's gonna go after him |
forcedbyhabit 6/21/06 . chapter 1Write more! Please! I'm dyin here! *wails mournfully* |
bluz 6/18/06 . chapter 1hm, I like the first chapter. can't wait to read the rest of the chapters. |
KayOrine 6/7/06 . chapter 8Wow, that was really good! I really enjoyed that chapter. Can't wait to read more! |
Yo-Yo 6/4/06 . chapter 8 I love this story. It's not as detailed and smooth as some of the others that i am reading, but there is something about a story that doesn't drag out the simple things too long (like the first kiss. I hate having to read 20-25 chapters of useless filler stuff just to get to that one simple point) that makes for a good change of pace when it's done right like this story. Great work, i can't wait for the next chapter. |
icedfaerie 6/2/06 . chapter 8Aww that was so sad...I can't wait until the next chapter. |
kjnhgtfrdefgh 5/30/06 . chapter 8No! ::sad face:: I hope they make up and Lark realizes just how damn wonderful Duncan is. Wonderful chapter dude. PLEASE update soon. - Celie |
Jamiesbond 5/30/06 . chapter 8wow... did he really just leave her stranded at the park? anyway i really like this story. i read it all today. and i read a favorite story of yours that i really enjoyed... all in all a good day! the bet idea isn't that original but you made it your own with this story. i really can't wait to read some more! keep up the great work and hopefully read a chapter soon! |
Grape 5/27/06 . chapter 8Sorry it took so long to review, been busy. Anyways, great chapter. I like how you actually make the characters seem real in this chapter, amazing job. Keep it up, hope that Duncan and her end up together! |
RedPillow 5/26/06 . chapter 8good job, update soon. |