good job, again hun...

great stroy line. really. defenitly on my favs list. UPDATE SOON!

"Whoever invented school needs to be shot."

Amen to that! lmao.

Lovely chapter. And the bet has finally commenced! Muwha! lol, PLEASE update as soon as you can dude.

- Celie

You don’t mind a little constructive criticism, do you? To make sure I don’t start this on a sour note, I do like your story very much and it has great potential. However (the dreaded but/however), you distract me horribly with Duncan and Lark’s conversation. About every single time Duncan says something to Lark, he says her name in it. Maybe he is obsessive with her name, it is part of his character, or something to that extent but it honestly irks me. It’s distracting. When you talk to a person you don’t say his/her name with everything you say. Now, I’m not trying to offend you; however, I do feel this would be a little bit of good advice if you take it properly. Otherwise, a lovely story idea. You’re on my author alert list, so you’ll be likely to see more of me if you don’t tell me otherwise. Good luck!

Awsome! I really like how you write, its good! *laughs* I hope that you post the next chapter ASAP!

haha! I remember this story now... but forgive me if I cringe everytime I see "Brent"... *shudders* bad memories... update soon, girlie, and love ya lots!

Caycee aka Avaelin

Good story! It's very well written. I think maybe Duncan and Lark will get hooked up, but who knows? Well, except you anyway. I think she might either hook up with Brent or Duncan, probably.

Hey!

I agree with Vanessa! I think he HAS been putting up a front to everyone! Including her! HEHEHE! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE? I really wanna see what happens to her!

Luv ya,Tashi :)

Oh wow thats really writtin well. And i happened to like it alot. Please so write more longer chapter! Thank you.

-KoiTenchi

great story. i'm interested to know what will happen next. great last 2

Lark, wow that's an interesting choice for a girl's name, but interesting none the less lol. It's very different, I like it lol. This looks really good so far, PLEASE update as soon as you cann dude. I can't wait for more!

- Celie