o awsome-ness...

This story is indefinitly accepted to me. It will be one of my favorites, as will be some of your other stories. (The words literally create blood and chocolate in my mouth. One as tastefull as the other.

The repitision realy makes it effective. I like it - So true too.

You say this was not based on yourself, yet i wonder where these emotions have come from. But its actually how i feel atm... i really like it. I can relate to this completly. x

i know how this feeling goes. don't you just wish sometimes that you could take a break from it all? take like a week off from your life and go to hawaii? i do. i like the rhyming, and flowed very well. nicely written!

I am very bad at reviews, and ur obviously amazing at giving people something to review about! I really like this poem. Well done, keep it up!

its a really good poem although two things:Do you ever write anything happy? :Pandis fakeness a word ? :S