Rhyming! And you actually managed to pull it off unlike a lot of people on here! I really like the last stanza the best. "We'll make love in our sleep." Nice.

This one rhymed much better... and it's legible! Heh, heh. This was great (of course).

great poem- it flows extermlly well. i love the line 'as soft as velvet lace' good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~

so serene and well-worded. love the third stanza the best, however: i feel the fourth has a lot of meaning too.