I loved how every line ended the same ^_^ Well thought through too!I wuv you :) x

A very good expresion of emotion, i can see you focus highly on the bond though love a very passionate poem.

Really nice poem, i like the thought and emotion which has gone into it and i like the way in which you have repeated the word love at the end of each line. Also, i don't know wether it is intentional but i like the shape of the poem on the page.

great poem- i love how you end every line with 'love' good job ;)~dropsofjewpiter~

i hate the prospect of first love because just when i think i'm over him i fall in love all over again. but still i like this poem. first love really never does go away. i liked your poem. it was great. never stop writing!

the repetition of "love" at the end of each line really brings out your feelings for this person. :) nice.