another great one. im finding that i like your poems...

keep on writing ~~MWR-:|:-

Whoa man! i love that! i love the revealing bold ...

it adds so much!

:)

hidden words are always good things. i do love that line about the falsetto mimicing** oh!tragic spelling issues

i have not seen you for a very long time

this poem was awesome on many levels. I love the wording and bulk of the actual poem, it kind of seems fairy-tale-ish. for some reason it puts in my mind the image of a joker floating through a vacuous space. plus, hidden messages are always cool. great job, keep writing.

~arisu