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| Needa S 2006-04-30 ch 1,   | Touching. Awesome write. |
| Isis lives 2006-04-20 ch 1, | Great poem, but I somehow felt that it should have ended on the penultimate line ('Now will you listen to what I'm trying to say?). I only say this because it is perfect in every other way, and I really really like it! Keep on writing, this is really good. :D Isisx P.S plz do not feel disencouraged by what I wrote... if what I wrote actually made sense. Remind me why I'm aspiring to be an author again? :S |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-02-24 ch 1, | interesting rhyming~ it could be more structured, but overall well done keep writing! |