nicely done and very emotional, but I could almost do without the rhyme sometimes. it's awesome that you're skilled enough to rhyme, I mean, I never can, but you should be careful not to sound forced.

A very well writen show of you emotions. I'm sorry this happened, but you wrote beautifully.

I so can realte to this. This poem ran very smoothly. Sorry to hear you go through this. One of my pet hates its liars.~Dana

I like the ending =) A couple glyphs in spelling here and there but the content's good overall =P Nicely done! Keep writing!!

Jade

intense emotions come across clearly~ good work

keep writing!

Hm... Interesting.

I like interesting. This is good.

great poem, i flows wonderfully. good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~

The poem seems to be very emotive and real, i like it a lot. I like the way it flows and the unusal rhyme scheme, which you have incorporated.