I really liked the first line, it was a really interesting kind of contradiction. This was very good, nice work.

Oh wow! The first two lines were... I don't know how to explain them. They definitely kept me here to read to the end, which I liked a lot as well. Keep writing!

~PDW

nice flow, i love the first line 'fill a thimble with my thoughts' great job :)~dropsofjewpiter~

That was just beautiful! I don't know what else to say!

Love it very good ! Keep up the good work