This is impressive! I particularly like the way in which the lines gradually increase in length as the piece progresses: that gives a very evocative feeling of gradually increasing arousal and abandon as the two move from their initial meeting to actually making love.

I'm not entirely sure about "Colin" as a name; it just doesn't seem very... wolfish... but there really isn't a lot else to complain about. This is unlike anything I've seen before, and is so in a highly effective way.

sexual, but beautiful. Wonderful job. I can't even pull something out of it to critisize... (people say that to me and i get annoyed... but... when it is the truth...) very well done.

Wow!

~xoxo~